About the Author: Mark Steven Long is a freelance copyeditor from New York City. He has previously published work in National Lampoon magazine, Reed, Paragraph, and InterText.
“Gretchen!” Clack-clack-clack.
Barely a foot in the door. She sighed, hauled the rest of herself into the house, and slung her purse on the table. “I just walked in,” she called out.
The clack-clack-clack of his typewriter was still constant, hadn’t paused even slightly. “I’m hungry!” he called out. Clack-clack-clack. “How long till dinner?” Clack-clack-clack.
“I just walked in,” she wearily repeated. “Have you been up there all day?”
Clack-clack-clack. “You know I can’t stop! I’ll die if I do!”
Gretchen’s sigh almost hitched itself into a sob. “You won’t die,” she said quietly.
Clack-clack-clack. “Gretchen?”
Good story. Very well done!
Excellent story! I felt as if I knew both characters intimately in such a short span of time. Well done.
Fun!