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The Whisperers


by L. A. Wilson, Jr.


About the Author: L. A. Wilson, Jr. was born in Norfolk, VA and grew up on the coastal plains of North Carolina. He currently lives in Atlanta, GA and is a member of the Mystery Writers of America. His works have appeared in Alfred Hitchcock’s Mystery Magazine, Night Terrors and Detective Mystery Stories, MindWings Audio and The Edge: Tales of Suspense. He was a nominee for best PI short story of 2011 by Private Eye Writers of America.


Excerpt

Somewhere in Central Africa

Without warning, the skies darkened at noon. The sun was obliterated by an amorphous blackness, and grown men shrank in fear. A whisper began somewhere in the heavens drawing frightened eyes upward. Day had become night, and the whisperers descended in a smothering blanket that choked away the very air. Those who could not run fast enough closed themselves in their shanties foolishly expecting their flimsy walls to be an impediment. The whisperers found each crack and crevice.

Those who ran succumbed to the same fate as those who cowered in their homes. Searing pain inflicted by rigid jaws incited howls of agony.

Within days the whisperers had gone leaving the surviving populace to nurse its wounds. All were grateful to still be alive, but most would never be the same.

Atlanta, Georgia

Three years later

 

“What you looking at?” Ivory Roberts asked with exaggerated and contrived displeasure.

“I’m lookin’ at you,” the child responded without the slightest hint of intimidation.

“Didn’t your mama tell you that it’s rude to stare at people?”

“My mama don’t tell me much of nothin’,” the child retorted.



Story Comments

Mar 29 - Susan R

Very intriguing!




Mar 29 - Sylvia Auclair

Excellent story! I enjoyed it very much.




Mar 29 - David Winn

You may need to expand this story to a novel. More time in Africa to make sure the whisperers do not return. What happens next in Atlanta for everyone. Good stuff.




Mar 29 - Bruce McAllister

Wonderful story, L.A. Love the final line, too.




Mar 30 - Robert Petyo

This is a terrific story. Exciting and fascinating. Well done.




Mar 30 - ZIAUL MOID KHAN

A great piece of a story, once in a lifetime experience. One who starts to read it, has to finish it. Keep writing, keep creating magic.




Mar 30 - Tina Jude

Fascinating story! Spellbinding! Definitely novel material, but a well written short story as well!! Bravo!




Apr 1 - Frances Dunn

This was a well written, terrific story. I haven't read one this good.....in a long time. Kudos to the author




Apr 5 - George Garnet

Another great piece on the pages of Mystery Weekly!




Jun 29 - Jack Smiles

It kept me reading to find out what the hell happened in Africa and how it connected to an inner city in USA.




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